Friday, January 16, 2015

subtle gentle rose aroma

Oh, blog, I've missed you so much. I haven't been in Paris in almost a month (how time flies when you're busy out of your mind), but Paris is still on my mind.

Well lets get to the point of today's post. Remember how I couldn't get emails from Christina because they were going to my spam folder? Well it has always bothered me that I didn't know what she had written to me. While doing my makeup today I suddenly had the realization that Christina's emails might have been saved in my umail (UCSB email) account. I had often written to her using the account, and I have the account set up so that it forwards all of the emails it receives to my gmail address. Well, I checked my umail and saw all of Christina's emails!! Here are all of the things she said to me; they make so much sense now.

From: Michaela D. McGinnis <michaelamcginnis@umail.ucsb.edu>
To: vonkoehler <vonkoehler@aol.com>
Sent: Tue, Oct 21, 2014 6:06 pm
Subject: Histories of Paris: Midterm Exam Question


Dear Christina, 

I'm outlining my midterm questions, and I'm having some difficulty. I want to do question two that asks how religion tore France apart or kept it together. I want to start by discussing Clovis and how he used church structure and assistance to create his bureaucracy. The problem is that I can't find a Parisian building to bolster my argument. I can talk about the cathedral in Reims, but that isn't in Paris. Do you think that I should focus on another era/regime instead of starting with Clovis? The only thing I can really say about Clovis, building wise, is that he was a great church builder. 

The other area I chose was the 1500s (starting with Luther and ending with Henri IV's Editct of Nantes). I'm also having trouble findng a building for that. I'm thinking of citing the church across from the Louvre for the section when I discuss the attack of the Guise family on Protestant militia after Henri IV's wedding to Margot. Obviously, religion was tearing Paris/France apart during this period. 

The last section I'm going to write about starts with Louis XIV rescending the Edict of Nantes and then going into a discussion about how religion was banned in the Republic. My thesis for this section is that there was no religion, thus solidarity was created through atheism (become an aethist or leave the country). I might bring in the Pantheon to cite this. I haven't really fleshed out this section. 

Do you have any guidance you can offer me?

Best,

Michaela McGinnis 

Dear Michaela,

I'm not sure whether Caroline Pierce or you students choose each other for the semester, but you -- once alumni -- should all get in touch on a private Facebook page!  Caroline seems to have either a nose for the smart cookies or a subtle gentle rose aroma that attracts strong young women like you.

Of course you can use Clovis!  Why not  place him in the introduction and use your own observations to build out from your text below: he didn't build yet, maybe that means something?...needed to go to Reims, so then Paris needed to be discovered...chosen?

Your questions comprise all things you could have figured out on your own :)  Sometimes, just take question or challenge or job and just flip it on its back, like a turtle, and tickle its stomach.

Yes, dig deeper into the church across from the Louvre -- St. Germain l'Auxerrois (use Horne's index) -- and why not the Louvre itself? Plus, that wedding took place at Notre Dame, play with that ball of string too! 

Oof, relax!  You only got the midterm prompt this morning.  That you are, already bubbling away, proves the best of signs!

Your,
Christina

Dear Christina,

I'm in a group with Morgan and Annie for the Les Invalides project, and Morgan and I just wanted to contact you regarding Annie's participation. 

Annie was unable to accompany Morgan and me when we first visited Les Invalides. All of the pictures included in the project are ours. Furthermore, Annie did not share in her portion of the writing. She emailed her final draft to Morgan late Tuesday night stating that it was in a really rough form and needed editing. This is after I had edited her sections on two different occassions. The agreement was to email Morgan a final form of the paper for compliation; not a draft. I also had to email the pictures that were used in Annie's portions to Morgan because Annie stopped responding to messages after about 3:30 pm. 

Morgan and I then spent the late hours of Tuesday night attempting to edit Annie's draft into something presentable. It's not our best work because we didn't receive the document until late at night, but we tried our best to improve upon it. It's based on Annie's ideas, but the writing is mostly ours. 

We realize that this was a group project, but we think that it's unfair that we had to do so much work while Annie did very little. We don't think that Annie should receive the same grade that Morgan and I do for only doing a third (if that) of the work. 

We just wanted to inform you of what happened. 

Best,

Michaela McGinnis

Oh dear oh dear oh dear...

That you are awake and angry this late in the evening worries me.

The exact same thing happened to me in college.  And this kind of dynamic does happen sometimes later in the office/hospital/legal team.

I get the sense that you two will give it all.  At this point, seven weeks in, I am not even sure who Annie is (Fergoson?). But I feel I know you and both your talents and strengths.

What usually happens in these cases:  a nice grade for the group project is not followed through on any other work by the person in question...so, in the end, this kind of behavior garners no benefits in the long run. 

I have noted this, of course.  

Please don't be perfectionists.  Get some sleep and get ready to enjoy the Opéra tomorrow.  The best you can do given the circumstances is probably quite fine!

Christina

Dear Christina,

Sorry to bother you over holiday, but I had a quick question about the synecdoche paper. The syllabus states that the paper is due week ten at the latest, and then states the last day to turn in papers is November 18. The dates for week ten are actually November 25 and 26. Which date is the paper due on, the 18th or the 26th?

Best,

Michaela McGinnis

Re : Histories of Paris: synecdoche paper


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